You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager.
Dear Manager,
I am Anjana, a regular diner at your restaurant at Madison Avenue, writing to complain about the sickening meals and desserts we were served last Sunday. I am hoping that you would improve the quality of food standards and maintain a good reputation.
I visited your restaurant on 19th June with my family to celebrate my husband's promotion in the office. It was supposed to be a happy and memorable night because we were commemorating a special event as a family in one of our favorite restaurants. But we have had a frustrating experience.
We ordered shrimp fried rice and dry roast chicken as the main course, and the items served were cold in which shrimps were undercooked and had a pungent odor. The items were not up to the mark for the price paid. The icecream that we ordered came without any marshmallow and strawberry on it, despite their mentioned in the menu. We complained to the waitress and she had no plausible excuse for that. This was utterly annoying.
Therefore, I demand a full refund and looking forward to hearing that you have taken the necessary steps to sustain the goodwill of your restaurant.
Your's faithfully,
Anjana
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 964.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73267268439 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3102423438 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.3333333333 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225197187847 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0649242170759 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495696506203 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121753466658 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437478833571 0.0580467560999 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.