Write a letter to a restaurant manager to organise a party Why you want to give the party What special arrangements you will need Any relevant question

Essay topics:

Write a letter to a restaurant manager to organise a party.
-Why you want to give the party?
-What special arrangements you will need?
- Any relevant question.

I am writing this letter with regards to check the availability of your restaurant for birthday function, next week.

Let me explain you in more detail. I am Tim Frank and planning to organise my sister's birthday at your restaurant on 10th July 2020. I am planning to book evening slot starting from 7 pm till 10 pm and around 50 people will be attending the party.

As my sister is turning 4 years old next week and she is fond of cartoon shows, so we are planning to keep Tom and Jerry theme as a decoration. Also, there will be kids who will be attending the party, so I would like to inculcate kids menu also in the dinner.

It would be grateful if you could let me know the availability of the restaurant and pricing for the same. I would also request you to send me the menu along with the costing of hall and decoration.

I will be waiting for your response.

Yours faithfully,
Tim Frank

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 743.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39644970414 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50090841659 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603550295858 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 216.0 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6042743747 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.3 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.2 4.34317383033 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120322144915 0.216113520407 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507190608402 0.0766984524023 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0333540276842 0.0603063233224 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0702576659732 0.12726935374 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272674674288 0.0580467560999 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.94 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.86 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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