Some people believe online reading materials should only be used for a child to learn to read whereas others believe only printed material should be used. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some people argue that only electronic reading material should be used for children to read, while others contend that
only printed material is appropriate. This essay will discuss both sides of the view and then I will give my opinion.
Usage of online content for children to learn to read has benefits. Electronic media is highly accessible with low cost to its
production. This makes it easy to use for exposing a child to wide variety of subject. For example there are a lot of free
story books available on Internet which can be used by kids. This will entertain them and also help develop their vocab and
spark a child's imagination. Additionally using electronic media for learning to read will assist in familiarizing children
to technology. Nowadays technology is huge part of everyday life. Early exposure will ease the children into acquainting
themselves with how to efficiently use it. We can also help them understand drawbacks of using electronic media and how to
use it judiciously.
Printed material also has some advantage for children. Using printed content as reading material has been proven by studies to
be best for comprehending a subject. It is slower to read and children will take time to understand the matter. It is also
appropriate for note taking, highlighting and memorization. In addition to that physical reading material will cause some
emotional attachment for kids. This will prompt them to take better care of their things and teach them responsibility.
In conclusion, printed material does have its benefits. However, I am inclined to believe that electronic media serves better
as the medium for learning. The easy accessibility of knowledge provides new outlook to learning. Also technology has become
central to life and children should be allowed to immerse in its wonders.
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- Some people believe online reading materials should only be used for a child to learn to read whereas others believe only printed material should be used Discuss both views and give your opinion 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, so, then, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23232323232 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86117240299 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538720538721 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.8744828154 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.0 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1428571429 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85714285714 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 15.0 4.38176352705 342% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.404406101763 0.244688304435 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1113547331 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118936533883 0.0667982634062 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137700528585 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119990109525 0.056905535591 211% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.46 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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