ou should spend about 20 minutes on this task The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You should write

Essay topics:

ou should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

Some interesting facts concerning the figure of students graduates from university in Canada divided into genders within the timespan of 15 years from 1992.

Overall, it is perceptible that both female and male graduates witnessed a noticeable trend toward the mentioned time span.

According to the given data, at the beginning of the chart, there were nearly 170.000 attendants concerning both genders in 1992; however, this figure experienced a noteworthy growth of nearly doubled in 15 years later, which stood at just about 245.000 attendants. Furthermore, the number of female graduated in 1994 reached the number of nearly 105.000 while this figure only accounted for nearly 85.000 during male graduates.

Turning to the remaining data, female graduates reached the topmost at nearly 150.000 attendants at the end of the period; meanwhile this figure only stood at nearly 100.000 during the males' line. Basing on the data provided, there was a substantial decline in both gender during the period 1995 to 1998, while the female figure declined nearly 15.000 students of the previous number of 115.000 and male figures experienced a slightly fell of nearly 10.000 graduates.

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Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1004.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39784946237 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60616858536 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569892473118 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.2559700143 43.030603864 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 167.333333333 112.824112599 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0 22.9334400587 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 5.23603664747 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0788787789859 0.215688989381 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0528399150598 0.103423049105 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403405404803 0.0843802449381 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0635242169285 0.15604864568 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442529964847 0.0819641961636 54% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.5 13.2329268293 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 61.2550243902 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.3012195122 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 11.4140731707 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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