Modern society is becoming more concerned about the increase in juvenile crime.
What do you think is the cause of the increase in juvenile crime?
What solutions can you suggest?
Delinquencies among youngsters have proven worrisome for modern society. This is mainly due to early exposure to the internet and moreover the indifference from parents. As we analyze the causes, there will be a number of solutions that can be applied to solve this issue.
Firstly, the main reason for juvenile criminals is that they get to use the computer and the web too early on in their life. With the abundance of movies and games online, there are inevitably bad ones. Children without experience can easily fall into such matters and learn from it. For example, they may try to imitate a mission in a game that involves thievery, thus build a foundation for actual crimes later on in their development. Secondly, irresponsible parents are also owing to the popularity of teen offenses. The lack of care from parents directly contributes to their children doing wrong. Without guidance, youngsters are more prone to making mistakes, and then keep on repeating it. As a result, these children might commit crimes before their parents even realise.
Knowing the causes, there are two effective solutions that can be put into use. One way to tackle this is to ensure that children are protected from harmful media online while promoting safe and helpful information for them to see. By doing this reinsure that young people have less chance to see and copy bad actions and thus reducing juvenile crimes. Another way is to make parents supervise their children more closely, avoiding wrongful acts. This can be done by starting propaganda that shows adults how to teach their adolescents, and also the outcome if they do not act. Doing this will hopefully put a halt on young criminals.
In conclusion, by limiting children to safe data on the internet, and also promoting parents to care more about their child would be highly effective in dealing with this issue. If these actions are implemented, the juvenile crime rate would soon drop.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1630.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55215461301 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567484662577 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.6786146484 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.7894736842 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1578947368 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63157894737 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121208202385 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0379923778009 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.030812628332 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.077820428453 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0207191646176 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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