In some countries levels of health and fitness are decreasing and average weights are increasing.
What do you think are the causes of these problems and what are some possible solutions?
It is generally observed that the well-being of people, in some of the nations, has been shrinking along with inclining in their weight. This essay will explain the reasons and also suggest a handful of feasible ways to overcome it.
Perhaps the most contributing factor to this predicament is fatty food. Since individuals have gruelling schedule, time does not allow them to prepare their meal at home. Due to the fact that they spend additional hours at their workplace, which tend to decline in their physical exercise. Consequently, they confront plenty of ailments namely, obesity; digestion menace, and many more.This hurdle can be tackled by rocketing the price of processed dishes through introducing taxes on these. By which, the consumption of such cuisines would fall as most of the people would unable to afford it.
Is this the only cause and solution ascribed to the difficulty. Indeed, no, a further possibility seems to be stationary jobs. Being materialistic, people preferred to indulge in any task, regardless of their ramification, to satisfy their desire. Besides, sedentary jobs demand quite longer hours than usual. Owing to this, individuals are required to be sitted until they do not complete their obligation which drives hardship for them. This complication might be get rid by the bolster of governments. If they fix the proper timing of jobs, so that people can become rather health-oriented.
In conclusion, provided that high authority assist in sorting out the problem of putting on weights together with decreasing the level of healthy lifestyle by imposing the tax on junk food as it is intaken by majority of the population and as well fixing the working hours then, people would able to provide attention on their health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 60, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...erved that the well-being of people, in some of the nations, has been shrinking along with ...
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Line 3, column 387, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...besity; digestion menace, and many more.This hurdle can be tackled by rocketing the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, if, so, then, well, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1483.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18531468531 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81052117807 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664335664336 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.5243184732 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8666666667 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0666666667 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46666666667 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0881162238039 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0262644260381 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0355098419602 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0559446900476 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0294291025202 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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