The table below shows the percentage of the population who rode bicycles in one town by age group in 2012.
The given table details the surveyed information depicting the proportion of different genders of different age groups who rode bike in any given town in the year 2012.
Looking from the overall perspective, it is readily apparent that females led the whole distribution across all the given age groups. Although the population of all the ages loved cycling, the youngest group claimed the highest proportional rate.
According to the given illustration, among both the genders, the majority of females liked biking. About 52.5% of girls in the age group 0 to 9 were reported as opposed to 51.2% of young boys. Also, under the teenage group, nearly two-fifths of females went for cycling, which was much higher than the boys(25.1%).
In addition, with regard to adults, 7.4% more females preferred biking over just 10.8% males. Further, despite the fact of aging love for cycling didn't vanish. In the age group 40 until 59, 3.4% fewer men participated as against 13.7% women. Lastly, in the senior category, a significant rise was witnessed as compared to the adult's percentage, where 19.8% of females showed interest, while men fell behind by 4.2%.
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Suggestion: didn't
...pite the fact of aging love for cycling didnt vanish. In the age group 40 until 59, 3...
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Suggestion: adults'; adult's
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rest, while men fell behind by 4.2%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, lastly, look, so, while, in addition, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 6.8 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 976.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16402116402 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59462181681 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 106.607317073 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.698412698413 0.547539520022 128% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.7823918632 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.7 5.23603664747 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218957778853 0.215688989381 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0730877247128 0.103423049105 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727226374646 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129155164523 0.15604864568 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0732594148522 0.0819641961636 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 40.7170731707 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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