Business Processing Outsourcing is changing the worlds culture. Discuss both views and state your view.
The daily habits and the cultures were reshaped for the employees who are working in BPO companies. This essay will throw some light on the cultural changes which are reflected by the BPO (Business Process Outsourcing) companies.
Because the aspects of high-income people tend to work in the BPO companies which makes them to change their habits. They affect the health of the people who are working in their companies. For example, if they work in a Corporate environment then they change their habits according to it, such as food habits. Earlier days, people tend to make their food in their homes, and then they will bring it to the office and eat. But nowadays they are used to eat fast-food and pizzas in their canteen. Hence, this will make the people health very bad.
On the other hand, people tend to change their attitudes because of working in BPO, it not only affects the health and it also has some disadvantages to their surroundings. To cite an example, if they want to buy any products like daily accessories, electronic equipment then they tend to go for that particular brand shops in shopping malls which will affect some shops nearer to their home who depends on the nearby customers and other problems such as, if they work in BPO companies they will be work according to the foreign calendars such as there is no holiday for the cultural occasions which are happening in their native place. Eventually, this will change their habits to avoid cultural programs in their home.
To sum up, People can change their habits according to the working place but they should remember about the native cultures which help them and also their surroundings in many ways.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, then, for example, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1411.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86551724138 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40496167659 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.472413793103 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 104.666235403 49.4020404114 212% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 117.583333333 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1666666667 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.074285118069 0.244688304435 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0420775815012 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564074645684 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0724733957033 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570199915774 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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