Despite a variety of sports facilities and gyms, people are less fit nowadays than ever before.
What do you think are the main causes of the problem?
What solution can you suggest?
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To live a healthy life it is imperative to stay fit. However, it is believed that people are living more unhealthy life than ever before even they have the facilities like sports and gyms. This essay will discuss as to why people are unhealthier nowadays, and put forward several solutions.
To begin with, there are many reasons why people are living less healthy life than previously. Firstly, nowadays people are more focused about their career and hectic schedule they are less cared about their fitness, just because of a bright future, they almost forgot that it is also important to stay healthy and fit. Secondly, misuse of technology is also a one of the major causes that people are putting weight, instead of going gym or participating in any sports, they usually like to spend their time with their gadgets like, mobile phones, tablets and paly stations. Lastly, a bad eating habit is also a reason people are not in shape, it is seemed that people are more likely to eat fast foods in their day to day life. Eating fast food lead, to obesity and it causes many problems to their health.
However, there are many reasons why people are failed to take care of their health but there are also several solutions for these problems. People should stop or cut down their eating junk food habit, and start eating healthy food and they can include some nutritious diet in their daily routine. Moreover, instead of playing games in their play station at home, they can enroll them to some kind of sports or take membership of gym. In case if they are not able to hit the gym, they can exercise at hmoe, through online fitness courses. For example, on YouTube only, there are many fitness instructors who take fitness classes daily on their channel.
In conclusion, although there are many reason people are not fighting fit than ever but there are several solutions that can people encourage to be more active for their health.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, as to, for example, in conclusion, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1606.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76557863501 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20286791191 2.80592935109 79% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519287833828 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8247487607 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.714285714 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0714285714 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.78571428571 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168516605842 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0701426683183 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409296839527 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125312280449 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0259141244852 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, as to, for example, in conclusion, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1606.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76557863501 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20286791191 2.80592935109 79% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519287833828 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8247487607 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.714285714 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0714285714 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.78571428571 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168516605842 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0701426683183 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409296839527 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125312280449 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0259141244852 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.