Despite a variety of sports facilities and gyms, people are less fit nowadays than ever before.
What do you think are the main causes of the problem?
What solution can you suggest?
To live a healthy life it is imperative to stay fit. However, it is believed that people are living an unhealthy life than ever before though they have facilities like sports and gyms. This essay will discuss as to why it is happening, and put forward several solutions for this issue.
To begin with, there are many reasons why people are living a less healthy life than previous times. Firstly, nowadays people are more focused about their career and hectic schedule, and they care less about their fitness because of their bright future. They almost forgot that it is also important to stay healthy and fit. Secondly, misuse of technology is also a one of the major causes that people are putting on weight, instead of going to the gym or participating in any sports. They usually are addicted to their sedentary lifestyles and like to spend their time with their gadgets like, mobile phones, tablets and play stations. Lastly, having improper dietary patterns is also a reason why people are not in shape. Eating junk food leads to obesity and it causes many problems to their health.
However, there are many reasons why people are failing to take care of their health, but there are also several solutions to these problems. People should stop or cut down on their eating of junk food, and start eating healthy foods. They can include some nutritious diet in their daily routine. Moreover, instead of playing games on their play station at home, they can enroll them to some kind of sports or take membership of gym. In case if they are not able to hit the gym, they can exercise at home through online fitness courses. For example, on YouTube only, there are many fitness instructors who take fitness classes daily on their channel.
In conclusion, although there are many reasons why people are not being fit than they used to be earlier, but there are several solutions that people can adopt to be more active and biologically healthy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 490, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'usually' is usually put after the verb 'are'.
Suggestion: are usually
...ym or participating in any sports. They usually are addicted to their sedentary lifestyles ...
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Line 7, column 155, Rule ID: ADOPT_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'adapt to'?
Suggestion: adapt to
...e are several solutions that people can adopt to be more active and biologically healthy...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, as to, for example, in conclusion, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1619.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80415430267 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25983436151 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519287833828 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0904372416 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2352941176 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8235294118 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.05882352941 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17175289729 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602236530671 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374683151858 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11621217051 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0111420904804 0.056905535591 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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