you have just heard some good news about your friend. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
• say how you heard the news - announcement on fb
• arrange a time to visit your friend at his/her house -
• explain what you will bring with you - meals
Dearest Sarah,
I cannot express to you how ecstatic I am to learn, from your Facebook announcement, that you and David are in the family way. My heart is brimming with joy as I know the challenges you have been facing with trying to get pregnant. The resilience you have demonstrated through your very difficult fertility treatment, and above all your positive belief that this process would lead to fruition, is so commendable. I hope you are keeping well as I am sure your very doting husband is doing everything in his capacity to take care of you.
While I am quite swamped with work at the office, I cannot contain the excitement and want nothing more than to be with you and share of this joy in person. Since you have been advised bed rest for your first and very important trimester, why don’t I come to your place and spend a day with you. That will not only help ward off your boredom for one day but it will feel like old childhood days when we took play-dates and sleep-overs at each others’ homes. I cannot believe our lives have moved so far ahead and we are now at the cusp of turning into parents ourselves.
I would like to put date in your diary and block September 27 this coming Friday for me to visit you. Please let me know of an alternative as I do not wish to come in the way of your couple-time on the weekend. I could come in at 10:30 a.m. and spend time with you until after tea at 4 p.m.
Since I know you have restricted mobility and the nutrition in your food is important, I would like to bring along a special nice 'Moroccan Tagine' dish which is now my specialty. It seems like the perfect choice as it is very slow cooked chicken, loaded with Mediterranean vegetables, dried apricots and nuts.
I cannot wait to spend time with you and to hear every detail of how this big milestone unfolded for you.
Look forward to hearing from you soon. Do take care of yourself.
With much love,
Tia
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| 2020-08-18 | FergusTheBeagle | 78 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ' the Dearest'.
Suggestion: The Dearest
Dearest Sarah, I cannot express to you how e...
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Line 7, column 291, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... time with you until after tea at 4 p.m. Since I know you have restricted mobilit...
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Line 9, column 309, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ean vegetables, dried apricots and nuts. I cannot wait to spend time with you and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 5.05154639175 277% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 32.9175257732 182% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 26.3917525773 220% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1602.0 937.175257732 171% => OK
No of words: 356.0 206.0 173% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 3.78020617076 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7723167995 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 127.690721649 157% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564606741573 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 487.8 290.88556701 168% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.497357973 44.8134815571 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.8 76.5299724578 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7333333333 16.8248392259 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.46666666667 4.34317383033 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359158887217 0.216113520407 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127215858581 0.0766984524023 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743475892065 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187787342106 0.12726935374 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0780948740089 0.0580467560999 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 70.7449484536 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.12 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 41.2886597938 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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