The crime rate among teenagers has increased dramatically in many countries. Discuss some possible reasons for this increase and suggest solutions.
An empty mind is a devil's workshop. Most teenagers today do not have any ambition in life and thus resort to crime to fulfil their needs. This phenomena is not only restricted to under developing countries but appears to be a global one. This essay will discuss the main reasons contributing to the increased crime rates in youngsters and suggest a viable solution.
One of the prime reasons for increase in crime rates in youngsters is the breakdown in family relationships. Divorce rates are high in the modern world and it is the mother who usually gets the custody of the child. The child in his growing years does not have a role model to follow. They while away their time and are often influenced by the media and what they see on television. Advertisements creates a desire to own the top end brands and lack of money to meet these desires entices them to earn quick money by committing crimes. Some youngsters fall into bad company and are often misled into committing crimes to earn easy money.
A solution to this worrying problem is for the government to adopt a carrot and stick approach wherein good behaviours is rewarded and bad behaviour is punished. Apprenticeship programmes in various fields should also be set up to keep the youngsters engaged and give them a sense of responsibility. This will provide youngsters with a source of livelihood and most probably prevent them from committing crimes. Parents also have a crucial role to play. They should mould and nurture the child so that he can decipher between right and wrong from an early age. In families where there is no father figure, a male relative probably take on the responsibility of nurturing the child.
Therefore, there are various reasons for this rise in crime, but solutions are available. If we begin to tackle the issue now, we may be able to prevent the situation from declining further.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, therefore, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1560.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69506847461 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593846153846 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.4903963412 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.6666666667 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0555555556 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.55555555556 7.06120827912 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235882212953 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0667990228392 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101437648345 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141385446939 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0774687661962 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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