You are a member of an organisation which meets regularly at a particular restaurant. The most recent meal you had there was not satisfactory.
Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter
• explain why you are writing
• describe what went wrong with the meal and service
• suggest what the manager should do to ensure that you and your group return to the restaurant
Dear
I am writing to you to express my utmost dissatisfaction with the meal and service at your restaurant during my recent visit.
I am a member of the Rotary Club and the venue for our fortnightly meetings is your restaurant. We have always enjoyed the hospitality of your staff until recently where the food, as well as the service, was not up to the usual standard. For starters, we had ordered a platter of assorted vegetable bites. Unfortunately we were served the platter which was non-vegetarian. Some of us realised the mistake only after we had consumed the first bite. When we checked with the waiter, he insisted that the platter was vegetarian. We then had to call the chef who confirmed that there was an error in the order. All of us at the table are staunch vegetarians and have to undergo a special ritual to cleanse us from the sin of eating a non-vegetarian meal.
I would like to ask you to give us a complimentary meal for our next meeting which has been scheduled on 28th August. I expect the waiters will be extra careful to ensure we get what is ordered. Our order is usually standard and I don’t think this should be too difficult for your team to handle.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
XYZ
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear I am writing to you to express my utmost...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, so, then, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1029.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 225.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57333333333 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73597343139 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2221086645 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.5 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0714285714 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07142857143 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212798361842 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0681877237162 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579154852069 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141391201203 0.12726935374 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613990491817 0.0580467560999 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.