Modern children are suffering from the diseases that were once considered to be meant for adults only. Obesity is a major disease prevalent among children. What are its causes and what solutions can be offered?
weight gaining is the major problem of the modern world. Most of the children are suffering from these diseases. In this topic, we are discussing the cause of obesity and its solution.
To begin with, the first problem was the use of junk food. obviously, it is a fact that all children love to eat more junk food rather than homemade food which is the main reason for obesity. Today different types of packing food are available in all stores easily with reasonable pack and price. However, in modern days all parents are busy with their own schedules. so, they do not have much time for the child and make some homemade food. The solution for obesity is schools must give instruction to all the parents that only homemade food is allowed in the school area and also they must provide knowledge between homemade and unhealthy food and their effects.
Secondly, playing mobiles, games and watching tv also another main cause of obesity. Nowadays, children enjoy indoor games rather than outdoor games. parents also allow them to stay indoor for security reasons. so, without exercise and physical gaining weight is simple. For the solution, the school must provide some physical activities class for their students as named their hobbies at least once a week. moreover, parents also give some time to their children and took them to park or social groud and play with them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, at least, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 5.60731707317 303% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1141.0 965.302439024 118% => OK
No of words: 235.0 196.424390244 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85531914894 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21393586095 2.65546596893 83% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 106.607317073 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574468085106 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 351.9 283.868780488 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.0104028106 43.030603864 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.0666666667 112.824112599 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6666666667 22.9334400587 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 5.23603664747 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 3.70975609756 270% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133669353538 0.215688989381 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0494269956046 0.103423049105 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428851934004 0.0843802449381 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11736673471 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0653131239225 0.0819641961636 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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