Governments officials should rely on their own judgment rather than unquestioningly carry out the will of the people they serve.
Government is made for the people, by the people and of the people. Maintaining peace for the citizens and carrying out tasks to grow economic conditions of the country are important factors of the government
To begin with, government has authority to change and amend rules for the citizens of the country. It depends on government what additional laws and restrictions should be applied for the betterment of citizens. However, it depends on citizens how they react after changing few laws . Believing on their own judgement can lead to ambiguous results. If the result will lead to detrimental to the society then citizens and opposing party disregard their laws. For example, Adolf Hitler had some cruel intentions to decimate country's economic and social welfare. In addition , if other countries and citizens of Germany would have opposed his decision then World War 2 would have been eschewed.
Second of all, government is formed to maintain peace and harmony for the society. In addition opposing government who has not been selected to run the country also plays a key role to extract some unanswered questions from the government. Debating such issues can make people aware of their government actions and orders.
However, there are few decisions which are not held by the people and have resolved. Government who takes charge of some tough situation and solves them without any doubt are highly appreciated. There are issues where they secretly resolve them with help of advisors and tact.
In conclusion, though government has power to invent or obviate a law for benevolent of the society but questioning such laws can bring a daily check on government mysterious activities. Trusting government tractably may hinder the growth of one's country
- Young people should be encouraged to pursue long term realistic goals rather than seek immediate fame and recognition 50
- Many important discoveries or creations are accidental it is usually while seeking the answer to one question that we come across the answer to another 50
- In any field of inquiry the beginner is more likely than the expert to make important contributions 50
- Learning is primarily a matter of personal discipline students cannot be motivated by school or college alone 50
- The surest indicator of a great nation is represented not by the achievements of its rulers artists or scientists but by the general welfare of its people 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...economic and social welfare. In addition , if other countries and citizens of Germ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...n peace and harmony for the society. In addition opposing government who has not been se...
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Line 8, column 243, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ment tractably may hinder the growth of ones country
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, second, so, then, for example, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 33.0505617978 30% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1483.0 2235.4752809 66% => OK
No of words: 285.0 442.535393258 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20350877193 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70112386304 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59298245614 0.4932671777 120% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 704.065955056 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.2602088839 60.3974514979 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6875 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8125 23.4991977007 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3125 5.21951772744 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175460485308 0.243740707755 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580036983665 0.0831039109588 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0355097926924 0.0758088955206 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0982189331758 0.150359130593 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272964116792 0.0667264976115 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 14.1392134831 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 100.480337079 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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