increasing numbers of students are choosing to study abroad.
To what extent does this trend benefit the students themselves and the countries involved?
What are the drawbacks?
In this world we can easily studying abroad because of the improvement of technologies and transportations. Furthermore, there are myriad of students continue their study to foreign countries. In addition, they can earn lots of knowledge that their hometown do not provide it and the countries that get lots of students from other countries can increase their human power too. However, this trend also has several drawbacks too. In this essay I will focus on these points and will emphasize it more.
To start with, students can gain new knowledge which their countries do not have it. Additionally, they also can exchanging cultures with some local students from the country that they live in. Government could also improve their country by receiving multitudes of foreign students and make them work in this country. For example; Japan is the best country that you may pick if you are taking chemistry and pharmacy major because this country has remarkable reputation for these 2 sectors, and also you can easily accepted in many chemical industry after graduated from university in Japan.
Nevertheless, there are also several demerits that you can also gain if you are not cautious enough. For instance; if you are choosing doctor as your major, there are some countries that will restrict you to not come back to your own country because you already learn and acquire knowledge from this country and receiving some scholarships, so that they want you to payback their gratitude by working for several years in their country without going back to your own nation.
To conclude, extending your education to other country is such a brilliant decision but, you must also pay attention with every rule in your country to study for.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 29, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'study'
Suggestion: study
In this world we can easily studying abroad because of the improvement of te...
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Line 1, column 132, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'myriads'?
Suggestion: myriads
...transportations. Furthermore, there are myriad of students continue their study to for...
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Line 3, column 515, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'accept'
Suggestion: accept
...hese 2 sectors, and also you can easily accepted in many chemical industry after graduat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, for example, for instance, in addition, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1454.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06620209059 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60315358754 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529616724739 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 89.9198331231 49.4020404114 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.166666667 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9166666667 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.41666666667 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182749610512 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.085797133642 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04065380351 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121502922863 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616396620514 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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