Today, TV channels provide man’s sport shows more than women’s sports shows, why? Should TV channels give equal time to women’s sport and men’s sport?
These days, TV programs broadcast female sports less than men sports. The reason for this situation that is men’s sport shows attract more audience worldwide, but I suppose that TV producers should spend equal time for both gender’s sport shows
Firstly, The crucial factor for sport shows is commercial purpose. Obviously, male sports have numerous viewers rather than female sports, therefore, the former ones are been on air more for advertising reason. It is the effective way to advertise some products of famous brands, such as Nike, Adidas, etc. for example, the king of sport, football, has the largest number of fans in the world. They not only enjoy to watch matches, but also idolize some football players, as Ronaldo, Messi, they want to own any items that athletes wear in the stadium. Secondly, sports are men’s favorite , they not only like to watch but also like to play it and from sport programs they can learn some exercises to enhance their skills.
Women are now increasingly conscious about their health, especially body. Females’ sport shows should be broadcast equal time as men’s sport shows to enhance women’s health as well as to keep fit. For instance, some programs, such as yoga, gym with professional instructors will motivate females intimate those exercises at home .Furthermore, spending time for both gender’s sport shows equally will help female athletes getting more attention from audience, they deserve to be noticed as male athletes, therefore, bringing the fairness in sport.
In conclusion, the universal interest in men’s sport show is the primary reason why such programs prevail among sports channels on television, and from my perspective ,TV coverage should not be biased and instead give equal attention to women’s sport
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1509.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27622377622 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53381745833 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601398601399 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.0575886587 49.4020404114 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.181818182 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.3636363636 7.06120827912 203% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.505585729394 0.244688304435 207% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.197308334777 0.084324248473 234% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.163950315034 0.0667982634062 245% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.362406089028 0.151304729494 240% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110897652867 0.056905535591 195% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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