In this developed world average life expectancy is increasing. what problems will this cause for individuals and society. suggest some measures to reduce the impact on ageing population.
A well-known age-old adage remarks that “Health is wealth”. True to that, many developed countries obviously take their national health schemes quite seriously. As a result, the overall life expectancy of the elderly has considerably improved in the modern age. However, these improvements carry their own set of difficulties, which will be discussed in detail in the below essay, as well as suggesting some measures to solve the increasing ageing crisis.
To begin with, every nation on this planet has their own percentage of aged individuals. Governments around the globe strive their best to develop and procure latest advances in health industry, in order to improve the overall well-being of the citizens, which in turn will garner them a successive win in the elections. Unfortunately, the numerous issues arising with a rise in older populace is often ignored. For instance, Countries like United Kingdom are really struggling to cater their rising geriatric demographic, despite their adequate supply of care homes, meanwhile the countries’ economy is drastically affected due to lowered retirement age. If someone retires incredibly early, they will be depending on government pension for rest of their time, thus leading to a greater financial burden.
On a deeper note, adding few more years to one’s life is a quite a bittersweet victory. Downsides include greater dependency, increasing health issues and further strain on healthcare facilities. Tackling such issues requires a dedicated effort equally divided amongst the individuals and the government. To cite an example, the ruling parties must consider extending their retirement policies, while giving an option to work after retirement, if an individual is willing. Elderly people can proactively contribute to the nation’s economy by choosing their well-versed hobbies, such as knitting or conducting online lectures, thereby adopting a lively attitude towards aging.
In conclusion, Ageing is inevitable to everyone, However Old people can greatly impact the younger generations, if they are adequately empowered.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 151, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'procure the latest'.
Suggestion: procure the latest
... globe strive their best to develop and procure latest advances in health industry, in order t...
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Line 2, column 703, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...one retires incredibly early, they will be depending on government pension for rest of their...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, really, so, thus, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1790.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.66455696203 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96815199979 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.680379746835 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.4157618974 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.333333333 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0666666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160076004172 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0492582229835 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404409407024 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0893327206108 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465297428492 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.27 8.58950901804 131% => OK
difficult_words: 132.0 78.4519038076 168% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.