Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time and have health problems as a result.
Why do so many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?
In the ultra-modern epoch, it is a point of debate that most people are quite busy in their work and they do not have enough time to look after themselves. There is a widespread worry and this will leads to a myriad of concerns in one’s life. This essay will shed light on the various consequences of lack of exercise and their possible solutions.
There are a number of arguments in the favour of my stance. The most preponderant one is due to work pressure and tight deadlines, employees have to work late at night. Furthermore, due to the cut-throat competition among colleagues, everyone wants to win a rat-race by which their chances of promotion will be increased. Therefore, having dedication towards their work, makes them couch potato, as a result, they forget to look after their health. For example, in the 2015 survey, researchers claim that nearly 75% of employees suffered from heart disease and diabetes due to the lack of exercise. Most of them got obsessed.
On the other side, there are a number of steps to deal with this problem. Firstly, corporation sectors must reduce the working hours and lower their work burden so that employees will get enough time for the exercise. Secondly, workers should consult with the doctors for nutritional plans which also help them to stay fit and healthy. As, these diet plans contain less fat and carbohydrates, moreover, they are rich in vitamins and proteins. For instance, the government must ensure the set of rules and policies which help in spreading awareness such as the importance of health and the effect of illnesses among society.
In conclusion, dealing with health problems due to the lack of exercise is one of the most prevalent issues that people face all over the world. Although, there are some flaws that can be dealt with easily by taking initiative cumulatively. Its potential impact is too dire to ignore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 199, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
...ere is a widespread worry and this will leads to a myriad of concerns in one’s life. ...
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Line 7, column 146, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...es that people face all over the world. Although, there are some flaws that can be dealt...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1580.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92211838006 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65442863936 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579439252336 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3306357716 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.9411764706 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8823529412 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.82352941176 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265777570004 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686620691268 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757938654268 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149047840776 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0283990393899 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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