You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback , participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel ,but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch .
Write a letter to the manager of the Hotel, In your letter
- Say what the participants liked about the hotel
- explain why they were unhappy about the food.
- Suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future.
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Rahul, and I am working with XYZ, India as a Business analyst. Recently, I organized a full day meeting at your hotel, which is very near to our workplace. I am writing this letter to apprise you about the feedback of the food served for lunch during the event.
Your hotel has a good reputation in the town and I have visited it myself with my family a couple of times. The Participants in the meeting really liked the services offered at the hotel.
Moreover, the staff was very courteous and helped us throughout the day with all the activities, which we planned to organise during the day. Coming to the food, most of the people were not happy with the variety of food at the buffet. Additionally, they were not happy with the taste of some of the curries part of the buffet.
I suggest you should put some more variety of food during lunch like Chinese or Continental for example. Also, try if your head chef can taste and inspect the dishes before it is being served.
Hoping, you will consider my suggestions for the future.
Yours faithfully,
Rahul
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- You recently organised an all day meeting for your company which took place in a local hotel In their feedback participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch Write a letter to the 92
- You recently organised an all day meeting for your company which took place in a local hotel In their feedback participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch Write a letter to the 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 288, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
..., they were not happy with the taste of some of the curries part of the buffet. I sugge...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, really, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 904.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56565656566 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40711542577 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616161616162 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.3414622059 44.8134815571 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.3333333333 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58333333333 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364334911304 0.216113520407 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115886297059 0.0766984524023 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0819862818207 0.0603063233224 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169827126723 0.12726935374 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0698843844954 0.0580467560999 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.