Nowadays celebrities are more money than politician what are the reason for this is it positive or negative development
Gone are the days when masses Had keen attachment with administrative member. This attitude has undergone sea changes.ever since the modernization comes in lime light. In this ap
epoch celebrities such as sports person and artists are earning hafty amount which is more than ministers. This essay shall elucidate the causative reason behind this approach in ensuing segments
First and foremost, reason why celebrities have higher income that owing to the acting skills which create boundary amongst them. To be more precise, By acting in perfect way they made especial place in audience mind,heart as well,where the public release that they are their real life friends. Due to the acting they establish great bound amongst them.For instance Mr Amitabh Bachchan who is reputed Bollywood actor across their 83 eversense he is in demand still working as audience has inner feelings with him so film maker giving him heavy package according to his demand. Not only this but also some celebrities reducing stress of common man by their performance which is the necessity of these days. t
To illustrate, celebrities most popular in audience Who's are comedian they entertain as well as make public laugh too. Comedy night with couple to cite in example in India is peak demand which is in decline anxiety from public life. Hence the producer always ready to give them expensive checker.
However, it might be politicians can do work for welfare of society with their income which is a necessity of development of nation. Nevertheless celebrities are essential part of society who always give Huge amount in a charity.By this I mean, they always the dat
did work for betterment of public. For example in coronavirus pandemic period Sonu Sood who is a well-known Sa
Bollywood actors spend millions on the help of public whereas the politicen did not contribute like him the highest earning of celebrities has a positive impact on society and it is a beneficial for the holistic growth of a normal public.
To recapitulate after discussing causes and impact I vehemently vouch that although Celebrities income has myraid reasons has highest rather than politician yet the income has a positive impact on society as well as nation which is beneficial for the country growth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
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Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1905.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1072386059 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68869929987 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592493297587 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 602.1 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
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Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.969149664 49.4020404114 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.071428571 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6428571429 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42857142857 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
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Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722351765097 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601659386076 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
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Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563276424375 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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