Claim: It is no longer possible for a society to regard any living man or woman as a hero.
Reason: The reputation of anyone who is subjected to media scrutiny will eventually be diminished.
In contrast to the claim, I think that there are still many living men or women that are regarded as heroes even under the scrutiny of the media.
Generous people are often viewed as heroes by humans. Even if the media finds something bad about the person, such as that he smokes or that he drinks a lot, it doesn't change the fact that the person did something great and worth applauding. For example, Shu-Chu, Chen, a famous vender in the market in Taiwan, saves a lot of money to donate to schools while she only earns a few money everyday. There are many media criticizing her when she stood up for a political figure running for the presidency, saying that she becomes a tool of the politicians. However, most people still think that she is great for her generous donation.
People who made great contribution in various domains such as technology are also regarded as heroes. Without their hard working, we can't live in such a convenient society. The reason why we think of them as great people is because of their important impact to the world rather than their identities. For example, the person who created the Internet is commonly viewed as the hero that gives us such a connected world. People hardly pay attention to his personality but focus on the contribution itself.
Those who save the people in need are also a kind of heroes. They take the risks that they will probably get hurt to rescue the others. For example, when there was an earthquake in 1999 in Taiwan, many people not only thought of themselves but also helped each other. They are all heroes that did something great for the society no matter who they are. The greatness is about the things they did.
I think that although the media nowadays could probably make a person's reputation diminish, the reason why some people are called heroes is not about the person itself but what they did.
- The following appeared in a health magazine The citizens of Forsythe have adopted more healthful lifestyles Their responses to a recent survey show that in their eating habits they conform more closely to government nutritional recommendations than they d 60
- As we acquire more knowledge things do not become more comprehensible but more complex and mysterious 50
- The following appeared in an article written by Dr Karp an anthropologist Twenty years ago Dr Field a noted anthropologist visited the island of Tertia and concluded from his observations that children in Tertia were reared by an entire village rather tha 58
- A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college 50
- College students should be encouraged to pursue subjects that interest them rather than the courses that seem most likely to lead to jobs Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain y 62
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 73, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'finds'' or 'find's'?
Suggestion: finds'; find's
... as heroes by humans. Even if the media finds something bad about the person, such as...
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Line 3, column 162, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...t he smokes or that he drinks a lot, it doesnt change the fact that the person did som...
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Line 3, column 377, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...onate to schools while she only earns a few money everyday. There are many media cr...
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Line 3, column 377, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[6]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun money seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'little money'.
Suggestion: little money
...onate to schools while she only earns a few money everyday. There are many media criticiz...
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Line 3, column 387, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...chools while she only earns a few money everyday. There are many media criticizing her w...
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Line 5, column 134, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... heroes. Without their hard working, we cant live in such a convenient society. The ...
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Line 5, column 505, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y but focus on the contribution itself. Those who save the people in need are al...
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Line 7, column 398, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...greatness is about the things they did. I think that although the media nowadays...
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Line 9, column 64, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...he media nowadays could probably make a persons reputation diminish, the reason why som...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, while, for example, i think, in contrast, kind of, such as, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 58.6224719101 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 2235.4752809 69% => OK
No of words: 332.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6656626506 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34033431006 2.79657885939 84% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 215.323595506 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527108433735 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 704.065955056 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.259614716 60.3974514979 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.1176470588 118.986275619 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5294117647 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41176470588 5.21951772744 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181045492802 0.243740707755 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0582041169468 0.0831039109588 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545211883546 0.0758088955206 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116497391028 0.150359130593 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468238666648 0.0667264976115 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 14.1392134831 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 48.8420337079 141% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 12.1743820225 68% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.1639044944 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 100.480337079 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.