It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer?
I believe that making new friends is more important than making old friends,i feel this way for three mains reasons, which i will explore in the following paragraphs.
First of all, it make us happy and we try new adventure. My personal experience is a great example of this, three years ago i was really not happy when i was with my old friends, our discussion was boring because we already knew everything about each other, but when i integrated a new school ,and mad new friends i was happy. for this reason meeting new friends is always fun.
Second of all, Old friends will not last forever, drawing from my experience, when i moved out to a new city, I was no longer keeping contact with my old friends, I was forced to make new friends, because i was feeling alone. It’s certainly clearly to see why it's not important to keep our old friends, even if we wanted, one day each one will take his own path.
Third of all, by making new friends, our chance of meeting our dream woman will eventually raise, for instance: a friend of mine has married a woman, whom he met, thanks to his friend, and now he is really happy. This is a perfect example of meeting lot of friends can be helpful sometimes
To sum up, making friends is more important than keeping old friends, this because we try a new experience, full of happiness and entertainment. Furthermore, if we are attached to our old friends, we well really suffer when we separate which will destroy us emotionally. Even though we didn't choose to leave them, One day, each one will follow his own path.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 52.1666666667 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1289.0 1977.66487455 65% => OK
No of words: 285.0 407.700716846 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52280701754 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47296493213 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526315789474 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 618.680645161 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.4098767197 48.9658058833 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.9 100.406767564 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5 20.6045352989 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5 5.45110844103 211% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.5376344086 343% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26416190779 0.236089414692 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129262554529 0.076458572812 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0922031901634 0.0737576698707 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177910834859 0.150856017488 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416407607186 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 11.7677419355 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.44 58.1214874552 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 86.8835125448 40% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.