Death penalty is the best way to control and reduce serious crime. To what extent do you agree?
There is a controversial view held among people whether execution should be applied to criminals. While I agree that there are some negative aspects of this measure, I still believe that death penalty acts as a stimulus to reduce criminal offenses.
On the one hand, death sentence can be considered unsuitable punishment for several rationales. The strongest argument is that once execution is applied, society seems to be brutalized, which unsurprisingly increases violent crimes and even homicides as the governments dismiss respect for life. Besides, there is enormous evidence showed that capital punishment is the most exorbitant penalty, which undeniably wastes national budgets. For instance, in Vietnam, death row inmates will be executed by three lethal injections, which recently is reported that cost more than a hundred million dongs for each injection.
However, death sentence undoubtedly serves as a deterrent, which is an efficient method to equilibrium society’s justice. First, a threat of being executed in the future would act as a hindrance to refrain a person from committing a crime. Recent research indicated that ever since capital punishment is abided by many countries’ governments, the rate of felons has been experienced a significant decrease. Second, it can be claimed that capital punishment is only given to inmates who commit heinous crimes such as homicide or sexual offenses, which undoubtedly are contrary to moral and ethical codes of humanity. Therefore, is there any chance to ensure that wrongdoers will not continue to trespass against the law and pose a menace to city dwellers during their rehabilitation?
In conclusion, although capital punishment might have some disadvantages, I still believe that it is the best possible way to help curb violent and serious crimes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, however, if, second, so, still, therefore, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46453900709 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98910088629 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.656028368794 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4787690817 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.416666667 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118871190458 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0404659189636 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471912175842 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0802472913261 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360025849318 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.21 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.