People naturally resist making changes in their lives. What kind of problems can this cause? What solutions can you suggest?
Rejection would be undertaken by people, if they create a changing. Having headaches can be felt by people due to oversleeping habit, and people can arrange time table to make descipline for ownselves.
The problem associated with people who are unwilling to change their oversleeping habit in daily life, resulting in to them in headaches. This is because people tend to sleep excessively which will distrupt their night time sleep, leading to serotin disturbance in the brain. For example, teenagers in Indonesia were interested to do sleeping habit more and more, accounted for around 15 hours a day which they had no activity in their live, and those increased the headaches risk almost 10% in 2019 related on sleeping habit all the time, resulting bad habit in their lives. Therefore, more and more time used people are to sleep, they will get cronic diseases leading to be unproductive people.
Those problem can be solved if people should have time table to arrange their activity, leading to having variety activities. This is to say there is a rememberable tools in order to be accostumed to do activity based on setting a time, avoiding too much sleep. Thus, people having a schedule in daily basis, they can be more productive and appreciate on time owned. For example, students in Japan are used to be decipline, for they have schedule by setting alarm in mobile phone from morning to night, leading to prevent waste the time like hanging out and playing game and fascinsting to read a book in their school and home.
To conclude, people ignore what ever activity that can change themselves. Those problems that can be felt is risk of health and those can be overcome by setting the schedule.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this problem' or 'Those problems'?
Suggestion: This problem; Those problems
... leading to be unproductive people. Those problem can be solved if people should have tim...
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Line 7, column 129, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this can' or 'those cans'?
Suggestion: this can; those cans
... that can be felt is risk of health and those can be overcome by setting the schedule.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, thus, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91034482759 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59643036764 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524137931034 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.5229701348 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.666666667 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1666666667 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211423539307 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0977888847011 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0790725853536 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158591797733 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0677828237897 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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