What do we need to care when we go abroad?
Studying abroad has always been a crazy and undeniably ambitious for many people. Even if you have a lot of money, it does not mean that you can easily go abroad and learn.
First, learning needs preparation and good academic knowledge. Imagine getting the visa and your flight already done. When you get to the school you learn and find out that you are not familiar with it. If you continue and try to keep up with the pace, you will be even slower and slower. That is just a waste of time and money, also health just to go to another country and then go back after several months! If you go abroad you might encounter culture shock, which is common to many abroad students.
Second, what if you fail to get a job after you learn? You will just have a degree or certificate in your hand and return to your own country. You might get a job then, but it is never as good as getting a job where you have learned university, master, or PhD, as you may be paid higher there, or you might change the whole family's living address. For instance, you finished master's degree in Columbia, and you return to your own country, in my case, Vietnam, and apply for a job at many companies, then you can choose a job that is the best for you. If you are in the USA, many companies still need you, your ability to work for them, and you may change the whole family's place to live.
In conclusion, studying abroad is complicated and mysterious, and is only for the best.
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- The first man to walk on the moon claimed it was a step forward for mankind However it has made little difference in most people s lives To what extent do you agree or disagree Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own e 61
- The first man to walk on the moon claimed it was a step forward for mankind However it has made little difference in most people s lives To what extent do you agree or disagree Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own e 61
- What do we need to care when we go abroad 56
- The first man to walk on the moon claimed it was a step forward for mankind However it has made little difference in most people s lives To what extent do you agree or disagree Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own e 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 290, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: Isn't
...ce, you will be even slower and slower. Isnt that a waste of time and money, also he...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, still, then, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1187.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.33211678832 5.12529762239 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20667751352 2.80592935109 79% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529197080292 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 363.6 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0880368735 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.7857142857 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5714285714 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64285714286 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0751985433982 0.244688304435 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0410983581302 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376804028286 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0697797128041 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359925202957 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 50.2224549098 154% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.83 12.4159519038 63% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.