The first man to walk on the moon claimed it was a step forward for mankind. However, it has made little difference in most people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
When Neil Armstrong put his foot on the moon, we finally had a bigger view of where we are. We could finally explore the gigantic universe and its mysteries. I disagree because it made a big difference in many people's lives. After all, it created many jobs and allowed us to explore many possibilities.
Since the start of the Space Race, much progress has been made. We have built the International Space Station, sent many rovers to the Moon and Mars, shot probes over outer planets and experimented with no gravity. There are many space agencies all around the world, creating jobs for millions of people. This helps the economy by utilising the top-most skilled workforce, allocating them to use as much of their brains as possible. Furthermore, we now have a better understanding of the Earth: how it was formed, how the Moon exists, and so on.
We have launched thousands of satellites that orbit the Earth, enabling us to do things that we couldn't do a century ago. Now we can be on opposite sides of the Earth, and still be able to FaceTime seamlessly. We can message any other person on Earth, and with GPS, we know exactly where we are all the time. Now that we have the Internet, we can find information a lot easier than before. Starlink, a company that provides Internet through satellites, enables even the most remote regions to be able to communicate with the rest of the world.
To sum up, space travel was a big step forward for us humans, and dramatic changes have happened since then. Therefore, we need to continue building on what we have today and improve the condition of living.
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- The first man to walk on the moon claimed it was a step forward for mankind However it has made little difference in most people s lives To what extent do you agree or disagree Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own e 11
- What do we need to care when we go abroad 56
- The first man to walk on the moon claimed it was a step forward for mankind However it has made little difference in most people s lives To what extent do you agree or disagree Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own e 61
- The first man to walk on the moon claimed it was a step forward for mankind However it has made little difference in most people s lives To what extent do you agree or disagree Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own e 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 97, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...Earth, enabling us to do things that we couldnt do a century ago. Now we can be on oppo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, if, so, still, then, therefore, after all, as for, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1329.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67957746479 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57126891333 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612676056338 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.077363124 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.0625 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0846794162852 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0328461178634 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372568702342 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0603860477356 0.151304729494 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0237574237313 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.