Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In sports, the physical strenght of a sportsperson is as important as mental strenght. In my opinion, every sport has its own tactics and strategies. One can be successful in a particular sport quite easily, provieded the sport has been understood by the player as well as the strategies. Physical strength will be of no use if the sport is not understood and practised with a sense of awareness.
Every sports person has a particular way and their own tactics to be successful in their respective sports. This only comes with mental strength.
On the other hand, if a person has a well planned strategy, however fails to imply it when necessary, the whole plan goes in vain if he does not have the physical strenght to execute what was in his mind.
Hence, according to me, I personally feel that physical strength and mental strength both, go hand in hand.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 7, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...sed with a sense of awareness. Every sports person has a particular way and their o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, so, well, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 717.0 1615.20841683 44% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 151.0 315.596192385 48% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74834437086 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 4.20363070211 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7421697174 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 176.041082164 52% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602649006623 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 209.7 506.74238477 41% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0744091838 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.625 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.875 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237549076412 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105951275229 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041894429633 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136733581673 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629587348093 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 78.4519038076 31% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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