Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
People possess different perspectives about how the workers can be more satistied. One group believes that the tasks should be similar, while another group thinks that the tasks should be diversed. In my opinion, I think it would be ideal that the workers can have many different types of tasks rather than similar one based on two following reasons.
First of all, the diversity of tasks can be more excited for workers, and the excitement can make worker more satisfied. For example, I was an assistant for my professor during my first year of university. Unfortunately, my responsibility was to reply emails every day for my professor, which was extremely bored for me. In turn, I quitted my job after one week. On the other hand, I worked as a research assistant when I was a junior. Instead of repeating routine jobs, I was authorized to survey for research, conduct experiments and also join discussion with other students. I was satiisfied with the job because it enable me to explore more fields.
Second, the excellence of workers directly lead to their satisfaction of their jobs. To be more specific, if workers only do similar tasks all day long, they would make mistakes because we are not robots. While robots can repeat jobs perfectly, people can easily make mistake because they are bored by what their job context. In contrast, if the workers have many different types of tasks, it would simulate they to think. While thinking the job can be better from time to time.
Admittedly, there might be some benefits about doing similar tasks, such as easier to dispatch job or easier to train new comer. Nevertheless, the mindset about the workers can not be improved since we are not robots. The feeling of the workers must be first priority to consider while discussing about self-satification at work.
To sum up, from above mentioned, it is beneficial for the workers to have diverse jobs because the excitement and excellence of mindset can bring them satisfied. That is why I strongly agrees that the workers should have many different types of tasks for their satisfication.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
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Message: Did you mean 'enables'?
Suggestion: enables
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Suggestion: many
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...tasks, it would simulate they to think. While thinking the job can be better from tim...
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Line 7, column 119, Rule ID: NEW_COMER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'newcomer'?
Suggestion: newcomer
...sier to dispatch job or easier to train new comer. Nevertheless, the mindset about the wo...
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Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'agree'
Suggestion: agree
... them satisfied. That is why I strongly agrees that the workers should have many diffe...
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Suggestion: many
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, nevertheless, second, so, while, as to, for example, i think, in contrast, such as, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1750.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 355.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92957746479 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72612028334 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512676056338 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.3784051589 48.9658058833 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9 5.45110844103 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226536466945 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749180699184 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793833047939 0.0737576698707 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129815064888 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534128004289 0.0645574589148 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.