Computer games are a waste of time. Do you agree or disagree?
Playing computer games is often considered a useless activity, but at the same time, it can be a useful experience. On the one hand, computer games do not provide physical bonuses or useful things. On the other hand, it is a possible way to sublimate some activity that can allow people to spend a more interesting life. I will look at this issue from both sides.
On the one hand, by playing computer games a person can relax and have fun playing a particular game. The gaming industry is growing and people can also get paid for their Hobbies. For example, a good friend of mine won a place in a computer game competition and received a large monetary reward for it. It turns out that the positive side of this is that people can relax and have fun and also earn money.
On the other hand, a large number of doctors state that there are negative consequences of the excessive game. Many diseases and illnesses can be caused by that, to say nothing about addiction or insomnia. In our age of computer technology, the issue of competent organization of the process of handling a child's computer and minimizing its negative impact on the child's mental health has become relevant. The most interesting and dangerous for children are role-playing computer games, they are able to form a stable psychological dependence, lead to maladaptation and disorders in the field of mental States. All of these could be avoided by spending more time outdoors or doing physical exercises. Summing up we can say that excessive games video games can cause great harm and become not just a waste of time but also have negative consequences.
In conclusion, I would like to say that it has both negative and positive aspects. Some people can get positive emotions from such a hobby or even earn money, while others have the risk of getting negative consequences from a seemingly harmless activity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 20, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...nd also earn money. On the other hand, a large number of doctors state that there are negative c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, while, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1556.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 326.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77300613497 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68166239198 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533742331288 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1023491239 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.25 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.375 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8125 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207888569947 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709826805921 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693440713114 0.0737576698707 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122603768425 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0746174463992 0.0645574589148 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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