People think that children nowadays have more freedom. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Public believes that liberty for the youth have high independence in present days. In my opinion democracy is more important for the teenagers in current situations occurred in the society.freedom for the children is to face the society in day-to-day changes.
In others point of view freedom is not much important for the children, because they mislead this opportunity and they can destroy their lives. For example parents in western countries makes their child free when they reach their certain age. In those some of them turn their life in better way with this liberty, but some youth involves in drug trafficking and involves in other notorious activities. Although they used for the good uses, but majority involves in bad way freedom. As a result, children are unsure about their future position.
Personally, I believe that independence is crucial for the child to face the society in present situations to adopt their life in a better positions. People in some countries like India, first i would like to say that freedom has given to child in their starting stages to choose their studies and their career to mould them according to the socitey, so they can makes their lives in better position. For example when we take the example of sachin tendulkar life their parents leaves the opinion to sachin after he failed in his matriculation to choose cricket or studies for his life, after sachin choose his career as cricket and he succeed in his life, this is the best example for more freedom.
In conclusion, liberty must have high for the children in present days, so they can manage their lives in any situations without any restrictions and they can succeed in their lives.
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but, first, if, so, for example, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96503496503 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54940905456 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.475524475524 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.316286629 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.090909091 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72727272727 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0824106716186 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0397474579622 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0289967614492 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0627441697624 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0235313966821 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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