You missed a flight due to a problem at the airport. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter
Describe what happened that caused you to miss the flight
Explain how missing your flight affected you
Make it clear what you would like the airline to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with your employee which caused me to miss my flight last week. I was going to attend an important meeting in Isfehan and I have booked my ticket on 24th September on the Internet.
Unfortunately, at the airport, when I wanted to get boarding card, your agent at the check-in desk, who were in charge of checking tickets said me that my name is not in the passenger list. I showed her my receipt of shopping the ticket and asked her to check again. However, she did not accept and finally I missed not only the flight but also the meeting which cause me many difficulties. At the end, she noticed that her list was not up-to-date and my name was in the final list.
I think the best way to rectify this situation is to fine your employee and also book me another flight.
I hope this matter will receive your immediate attention.
Yours Sincerely,
Yalda Asgari
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my dissatisfacti...
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Line 4, column 140, Rule ID: SAY_TELL[2]
Message: 'Say' cannot be followed by a direct personal object. Did you mean 'told'?
Suggestion: told
... who were in charge of checking tickets said me that my name is not in the passenger...
^^^^
Line 9, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... immediate attention. Yours Sincerely, Yalda Asgari
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 770.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55621301775 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53915798504 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627218934911 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0712874485 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5555555556 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7777777778 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88888888889 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149175236068 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0634702191152 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526380769343 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0866535014065 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0260097263093 0.0580467560999 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.