Advertising is all round us; it is an unavoidable part of everyone's life. Some people say that advertising is a positive part of our lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
As an inexorable part of our daily life, advertisements are caught sight of almost everywhere we go. While some people regard them as a positive element, I believe that is not always the case.
On the one hand, the first benefit advertising brings about is entertainment. We, more or less, have seen a funny advertisement that we are eager to watch it again to enjoy either the catchy background music or gripping content, which some of us may even learn it by heart afterwards. This kind of commercial activity is an ideal way to while away the time as well. Imagine one was waiting for his flight, he would probably love a brochure to read after being fed up with glueing eyes to smartphone's screen. Above all, without advertising, people could not get to know about products or services available suiting their needs and pockets among bewildering choices.
On the other hand, advertisements are becoming more of a nuisance these days. A common situation is whenever surfing the Internet for pleasure, a variety of advertising images pop up constantly, turning online experience into a nightmare. Even if we decide to watch films on television instead, there will always be commercial break disrupting the most thrilling scenes. Another minus point of advertising is its exaggerated claims about the real quality of goods. Generally, the brand tries to paint a beautiful picture of the product by having celebrity endorsement in marketing campaign, resulting in buyers being attracted, yet disillusioned once receiving their products.
In conclusion, advertising is not by all means good or bad, but it still plays a crucial role in our life anyway.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 358, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
... is an ideal way to while away the time also. Imagine one was waiting for his flight...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, first, if, may, so, still, while, in conclusion, kind of, more or less, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09558823529 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91754291501 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.705882352941 0.561755894193 126% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9709965705 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.615384615 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9230769231 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.30769230769 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214089911377 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070086539575 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641013292878 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146445412783 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0721828372141 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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