You have seen an advertisement looking for volunteers to teach English overseas. Write to the recruitment office. In your letter,
Tell them where you saw the advertisement
Explain why you would like to go
Describe the skills that you have that you think would help
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing with regard to an advertisement which I saw on your official Instagram page which was about teaching English as a volunteer in foreign countries. I explored your organization website through a link you mentioned there to find about admission requirements.
The main reason why I would like to apply for this position is the fact that I am really into teaching, especially English courses, and also, I have always dreamt about being engaged in this type of volunteering activities. I believe it is a valuable opportunity that not only give me a sense of satisfaction but also helps me to gain real life experiences.
In order to provide you more information about me to evaluate my application, I should say that I am an English teacher with more than 8 years of experiences. I got my Master degree from Iran university of Science which has a great reputation for its higher standards of education. As a teacher, I am very patient and supportive, and always willing to learn more. Furthermore, i am good at useful software such as Microsoft office.
Once again, I emphasize on my interest in this position and look forward to hearing from you.
Yours Faithfully,
Yalda Asgari
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2021-05-19 | Jeetrandhawa | view | |
| 2020-12-06 | yaldaasgari | 89 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 378, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ays willing to learn more. Furthermore, i am good at useful software such as Micr...
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Line 11, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... you. Yours Faithfully, Yalda Asgari
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, really, so, such as, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1016.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93203883495 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02714959158 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.669902912621 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 323.1 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.453157063 44.8134815571 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.6 76.5299724578 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9 4.34317383033 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21132530417 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677223340018 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588084509517 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124422739626 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542117777212 0.0580467560999 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 8.37731958763 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 70.7449484536 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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