It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours.
class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:10.0pt;line-height:115%;mso-layout-grid-align: none;text-autospace:none">Throughout the history, people class="have">have been looking to find an enjoy">enjoyable class="job">job in their life. In spite of the fact class="that">that class="some">some people believe jobs with class="five">five working days and class="short">short hours in a class="week">week are more enjoy">enjoyable, I firmly assert class="that">that working class="three">three days with longer hours in a class="week">week class="is">is the best way to enjoy. I feel this way for two reasons, class="which">which I will explore in the following essay.
The first and foremost class="reason">reason of the aforementioned class="notion">notion class="is">is class="that">that working class="three">three days a class="week">week provides a great opportunity for people to class="have">have more enjoy. In other words, in this condition, people class="who">who class="work">work just class="three">three days a class="week">week, class="have">have four days class="off">off in each of the weeks class="that">that class="can">can class="do">do everything class="that">that they class="want">want, class="which">which class="is">is more enjoy">enjoyable. class="my">my own experience class="is">is a compelling illustration of this class="notion">notion. class="when">when I was a teacher in an English institute last year, I worked there class="five">five days a class="week">week with class="short">short class="time">time. At class="that">that class="time">time, I was wondering to enroll class="piano">piano class, however, whenever I arrived at home I was extremely tired to class="do">do anything, so I prefered taking a rest for tomorrow. One day I talked to class="my">my manager to change class="my">my program to class="work">work for class="three">three days with long hours. She accepted class="my">my requiest, so after class="that">that I could enroll to class="piano">piano class in class="my">my class="off">off days class="which">which was really enjoy">enjoyable for me. Another noticeable class="reason">reason of the above state phenomenon, class="which">which should be mentioned here, class="is">is class="that">that saving money. To be more explain, people class="who">who class="work">work class="three">three days a class="week">week spend less money on their commute than people class="who">who class="work">work class="five">five days a class="week">week. What's more, they class="can">can save more money, and devote their extra money on enjoy">enjoyable subjects. For instacne, class="when">when I decided to talk to class="my">my manager based on the previous example, I talked to her on money class="which">which I spent on public transportation. after changing class="my">my program, I could save money class="which">which I had to spend on public transportation. As a consequence, the end of every month, I could go shopping, and buying whatever class="that">that I class="want">want class="which">which I enjoyed a lot.
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class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:10.0pt;line-height:115%;mso-layout-grid-align: none;text-autospace:none">Although class="some">some people believe class="that">that having a class="job">job where they class="work">work class="five">five days a weekwith class="short">short hours class="is">is more enjoy">enjoyable, in class="my">my point of view, people class="who">who class="have">have class="job">job where they class="work">work class="three">three days a class="week">week with long hours class="can">can enjoy their class="job">job more owing to they class="can">can attend in different classes to class="have">have fun, and they class="can">can save money to alocate enjoy">enjoyable things.
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- TPO48 Integrated Writing 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement At universities and colleges sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support Use specific reasons and examples to support your ans 66
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement At universities and colleges sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support Use specific reasons and examples to support your ans 60
- TPO22-teachers should not make their political and social point of views known to students 73
- TPO45 3
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, really, so, i feel, in other words, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 25.0 11.0286738351 227% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 4661.0 1977.66487455 236% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 434.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 10.7396313364 4.8611393121 221% => Less chars per word wanted.
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 11.6274981891 2.67179642975 435% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.453917050691 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1215.0 618.680645161 196% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.8 1.51630824373 185% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 214.452849576 48.9658058833 438% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 258.944444444 100.406767564 258% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 24.1111111111 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05555555556 5.45110844103 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.076228748493 0.236089414692 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0457914955465 0.076458572812 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0379763495873 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0430714774364 0.150856017488 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453796754653 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 41.2 11.7677419355 350% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -54.4 58.1214874552 -94% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 6.10430107527 280% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.8 10.1575268817 264% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 45.31 10.9000537634 416% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.002688172 190% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 27.0 10.247311828 263% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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