The diagram below shows the steps in the process of manufacturing of yogurt

Essay topics:

The diagram below shows the steps in the process of manufacturing of yogurt.

The flow chart represents the process of formation of yogurt in different steps.
To begin with, the process starts from heating of milk to 90 degree celcius temperature. After that , temperature is maintained for 10-30 minutes to make it more thicker. In the third step, milk is cooled at 44 degree celcius temperature from 90 degree. The fourth step is addition of live bacteria in it, which is known as yogurt starter. Further-more in fifth step, yogurt is allowed to incubate at 37 degree temperature for four hours.
After fifth step, yogurt is placed in a cool place to stop the incubation. The second last step is addition of fruits, sweetners and flavoring in yogurt to make it more tasty. The last step is packaging, after completing above step, it is ready for filling. After filling in container, these are labeled and therefore finally packaging is completed for shipping. Then the yogurt is shipped.
overall, there are eight steps included and temperature plays a great role in the quality of yogurt.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 100, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...0 degree celcius temperature. After that , temperature is maintained for 10-30 min...
^^
Line 2, column 158, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'thicker' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: thicker
...maintained for 10-30 minutes to make it more thicker. In the third step, milk is cooled at 4...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Overall
... shipping. Then the yogurt is shipped. overall, there are eight steps included and tem...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, second, then, therefore, third, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 846.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94736842105 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65197865863 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573099415205 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 19.379255805 43.030603864 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.5 112.824112599 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.25 22.9334400587 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 5.23603664747 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23988131611 0.215688989381 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0980789151502 0.103423049105 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052028336445 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153903315179 0.15604864568 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0171751058208 0.0819641961636 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.2329268293 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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