Many people today are choosing to travel to other countries. Why is this happening? Is this a positive or negative development?
These days, there has been a growing trend for tourists to travel to foreign nations. In my opinion, this can be explained by two major reasons, and I also believe that although the trend is beneficial for humans, it does more harm than good in the long run, especially to the environment.
To begin with, there are two primary reasons resulting in the popularity of international travel. One of them is the low-cost airlines are getting more popular in recent years. Thanks to the advance of technology, airline tickets have become more affordable for people from different classes, ranging from lower to upper classes, to travel even to other countries. Another reason is that people's wealth is increasing. Today people often work more than they used to in the past, leading to a higher salary they are offered and the living standard, as a result, is improved. Therefore, people have more money to not only meet their basic needs but also pursue their interests like travel, for example.
In my opinion, the growing popularity of cross-country travel appears both positive and negative. First, the trend can benefit people, especially those in host countries, as it may generate more employment opportunities. A variety of jobs are created, such as hotel managers, tour guides, or drivers, to meet the growing demand for accommodation or transportation of tourists, which can generate more income for host countries. Looking at the future, however, the development of international travel may lead to the degradation of the environment. To be specific, a vast majority of wildlife habitat is demolished to make way for service buildings, like hotels and restaurants. Beaches are spoilt with trash and as a result, lose their natural beauty.
In conclusion, there are two main reasons for the development of international travel and I believe that the trend is advantageous for local people but disadvantageous for the environment in the long time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, may, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1636.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14465408805 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93588112274 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562893081761 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6506014286 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.066666667 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140981256828 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0462449778965 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382331383729 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0816180730811 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0182459070799 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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