Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
According to the statement, Some masses believe that advertising is huge in success because it gives us idea to buy things while other people think that advertising is too common because we do not remember it for longer time and also not pay much attention. According to my opinion, advertising plays an important role and reasons behind both the views are discussed below paragraphs.
To begin with, according to some individuals advertisements are necessary to buy things because it plays an essential role and also shows a positive impact on the life of people. First of all, advertising is used for the popularity which comes in the market. Due to this, people become more attracted towards those products. People take more information about the goods from advertisements which help them to select the better things related to their house-holds, clothes, and so on. Moreover, this also shows awareness among the people about those people which are available in the markets or on online sites. For instance, "naptol" is the most popular advertisement site which shows their all products with whole details. As, if they advertise a bed sheet, in this case, they show the variety of product such as color , design, quality and so on. They represent the product by using them-self to the public. Due to this, people become more satisfy from these advertisement and able to buy product without perplexing.
On the contrary, there are some people, who think that it is a wastage of time to see advertisements because mostly people forget it. The major reason behind this is fraud and fake things. Because, they think that, companies are advertising their product due to the popularity of their goods and to sell them with high prices. In addition, people also do not care about the products which are advertised on televisions or on other sites because they know about the things which are available in the market as they do not need to pay much attention towards them. For instance, the advertisement of "Harpic" , the toilet cleaner is much popular, but no one pays special attention to it because it is too common.
To conclude, according to my view point, advertisements play an essential role because, by these advertisements, masses become aware about the things and are able to buy easily according to their choices with different varieties .
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: ,
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Message: Did you mean 'this advertisement' or 'these advertisements'?
Suggestion: this advertisement; these advertisements
...o this, people become more satisfy from these advertisement and able to buy product without perplex...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... the advertisement of 'Harpic' , the toilet cleaner is much popular, but...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...o their choices with different varieties .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, while, for instance, in addition, such as, first of all, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1977.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 391.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05626598465 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88924026246 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493606138107 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 625.5 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.3184789128 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.294117647 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23529411765 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336650759747 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108449504814 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0816358183549 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226077494654 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114819952174 0.056905535591 202% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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