alone reduce stress
The topic of spending time alone or with others to reduce stress has always been controversial. Although some people believe that they cannot control stress solo, many people think reducing stress alone. I think the advantages of relaxation by oneself will continue to outweigh its disadvantages. I feel this way for three reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
According to the psychological perspective, people can make a good situation for relaxation when they are solo. This condition reinforces their mind's ability to solve the problems that their mind has challenged. After the failure at the marriage, for instance. Many people prefer to be alone after divorce. It is a natural reaction.
Besides, the favorite activities and entertainments are useful ways to reduce stress. Therefore, people fulfill favorite activities, such as walking, swimming, studying, and so on. My own experience demonstrates this reality. Last year, I could not pass my exam in college and was too sad. I decided to relax and went to the countryside and tried to control my disappointment and stress. I walked for hours and thought about my mistakes. I found an excellent way to solve my problem too.
Finally, many people cannot overcome their stress with other people. They should be alone. Undoubtedly, it is a useful way for them, in particular nervous people. They make decisions better alone. They cannot control their stress with many people's criticism.
To summarize, often people, without a doubt, spend their time alone to reach better results, this is very important the people can manage their negative emotions. Getting stress under control will likely help people have a higher level of self-confidence. I think people can do it very well alone. Based on the above information, relaxation independently is an acceptable method to conquer their stress.
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- Writing task 1 TPO 55 70
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- TPO 54 Task 1 3
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 438, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...or hours and thought about my mistakes. I found an excellent way to solve my prob...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, so, therefore, well, as to, for instance, i feel, i think, in particular, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1572.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 299.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25752508361 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87300119384 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585284280936 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.1344086022 55% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.2032048095 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.88 100.406767564 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.96 20.6045352989 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.96 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251741215029 0.236089414692 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0654847057969 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103399387555 0.0737576698707 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143270938685 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101724040298 0.0645574589148 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.31 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.34 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.0537634409 64% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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