Today, majority of children are raised by their grandparents due to the fact that their parents are busy working. To what extent do you think that it affects the whole family?
As the economy improves and women enter the workforce at a higher rate, grandparents have taken on an additional role of custodians and caregivers to their grandchildren. As far as I concern, this phenomenon exerts both positive and negative impacts on the whole family.
On the one hand, looking after their grandkids keeps the elderly energetic and vibrant. In fact, research suggests that caring for grandchildren such as babysitting on the weekends is related to longer life expectancy for the aged. Moreover, such situations encourage close-knit family relationships because parents and grandparents need to discuss more to give a final child-raising method. Lastly, youngsters being brought up in surroundings with more caregivers could be more supported and well developed on both intellectual and emotional aspects.
On the other hand, grandparenting could cause adverse effects on both youngsters and family relationships. First, full-time adoption and caregiving make the elderly feel the burden of responsibility. To be more specific, they face a wide array of stressors such as strained relationships with birth parents in child-rearing methods or their increasing aging diseases, etc. Secondly, children growing without their parents' care could be physically and mentally affected. According to recent studies, kids raised by their grandparents are likely to be exposed to violence or suffer from psychological performance and behavioral problems. Last but not least, this situation would also loosen the relationship between children and their parents.
In conclusion, although some benefits of this phenomenon could be seen, they are, in my opinion, overshadowed by the considerable drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, lastly, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in my opinion, on the whole, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.77165354331 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23708247615 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661417322835 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.8050645366 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.769230769 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5384615385 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7692307692 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188613038066 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643197030206 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464116718292 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0960524616479 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0694700991529 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.19 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.36 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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