Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is true that today we have many options in some people's view. While I agree that we have a choice about jobs, products, interests, I disagree that they are too many at this time.
Firstly, we have different technologies that have modern technologies which can lead to disparity jobs and products made by them. For example, machines that produce chocolate also need many employers and managers who control them. Its job creator. Also, scholars or engineers who make the new machines can produce many types of products which had differences in quality, appearance, and speed which have an impact on consumers need. As a result, in today's world, we had different technology which has a good impact on the different lifestyle of people.
On the other hand, in today's world persuade us to be having jobs with good income. Because, how machines are made living cost increases, where we must have a great earning to survive if worker without family situation much easier than whom have because they should earn enough money for their family to be live or worker should work in many places to achieve their goals in near future. As a consequence, our world does not have many works which are enough for their family.
In conclusion, I reaffirm that we have many opportunities to be live and work. But I think that it is not a lot of like infinity amount of. I think being an employer should recognize my interests and good income. And we never have a lot of works because they are in harmony with benefits and drawbacks.
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- Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1043.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 217.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8064516129 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45642436974 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617511520737 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 328.5 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.2326152896 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8181818182 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7272727273 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27272727273 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257834846055 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112211652356 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101227263774 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207285000176 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124932302676 0.056905535591 220% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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