Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Always temng the truth is, the most important consideration in any relationship.
Use specific reasons and examples to suoport your answer. Be sure to use your own
words. Do not use rnemorized examples.
Need may come for someone in a relationship to lie to their partner at some point or the other. While some of them go ahead and lie to their partner to keep the relationship afloat, others experience qualms about lieing to their partner and instead, reveal the truth. The prompt suggests that telling the truth always is the most consequential consideration in any relationship. I agree with the prompt and feel that being truthful to your partner is the most important pillar in supporting a relationship for the following reasons.
Being truthful to your partner always enhances the trust she has placed in you. On the contrary, if you lie to your partner, it is highly likely that the trust she has placed on you would degrade. Let me explain in detail how a trust, which is one of the pivotal elements in a healthy relationship, would degrade if you lie to your partner. Sooner or later, due to conjuction of various events that are not under your control, she will come to know that you lied to her. As soon as she realized that you betrayed her, though her facade might suggest that she is fine with it and there is no harm done, she would slowly start to lose trust in you. The loss in trust would only accelerate as you face more situations where you have to lie to her and she eventually finds out that you lied to her. After the trust has taken a huge blow, the relationship reaches to a point where she innately assumes that whatever you tell her is a lie. And it is a no brainer to figure out where such a relationship is headed to - a breakup.
Thus, one can see how important it is to be truthful to your partner at all times.
One chooses to be truthful even if the ramifications of such a precarious decision are not propitious, it may momentarily cause a dent in the relationship. However, it paves the way for a stronger and better relationship in the long run. She might get upset and mad at you as a consequence of telling the truth but mind you, the trust she has placed in you will never erode. Moreover, one should not demur to disclose the truth to your partner no matter what the truth is and if your a hesitant about revealing the truth, then there is a serious reason to doubt the veracity of your relationship. In a true relationship, partners don't just judge you by only considering whether you told them a truth or or a lie. They take into consideration the circumstances that made you do something that would upset them. Therefore, it is highly likely that the partner would forgive you for doing something that is not on their cards. Or in the worst case, they might break up with you but on amicable terms. That is, they would still not lose trust in you.
To recapitulate, it is always important to tell truth to your partner because sooner or later, she will come to know about the truth and she would lose trust in you which would eventually lead to collapse of the relationship. Incontrast, the relationship will only strengthen in the long run even if it takes a transitory hit if you tell the truth always.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 358, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... is the most consequential consideration in any relationship. I agree with the pr...
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Line 1, column 535, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...relationship for the following reasons. Being truthful to your partner always en...
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Line 6, column 481, Rule ID: YOUR[3]
Message: Did you mean 'you're' or 'you are'?
Suggestion: you're; you are
...tner no matter what the truth is and if your a hesitant about revealing the truth, t...
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Line 6, column 632, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...nship. In a true relationship, partners dont just judge you by only considering whet...
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Line 6, column 702, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: or
...nsidering whether you told them a truth or or a lie. They take into consideration the...
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Line 8, column 349, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[3]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
... a transitory hit if you tell the truth always.
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, then, therefore, thus, while, mind you, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 9.8082437276 214% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 85.0 43.0788530466 197% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 74.0 52.1666666667 142% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2497.0 1977.66487455 126% => OK
No of words: 558.0 407.700716846 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47491039427 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.86024933743 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62500037145 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.415770609319 0.524837075471 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 758.7 618.680645161 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.202989062 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.041666667 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211709123812 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0828366213521 0.076458572812 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566866461755 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142736205518 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0310746929875 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 358, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... is the most consequential consideration in any relationship. I agree with the pr...
^^
Line 1, column 535, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...relationship for the following reasons. Being truthful to your partner always en...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 481, Rule ID: YOUR[3]
Message: Did you mean 'you're' or 'you are'?
Suggestion: you're; you are
...tner no matter what the truth is and if your a hesitant about revealing the truth, t...
^^^^
Line 6, column 632, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...nship. In a true relationship, partners dont just judge you by only considering whet...
^^^^
Line 6, column 702, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: or
...nsidering whether you told them a truth or or a lie. They take into consideration the...
^^^^^
Line 8, column 349, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[3]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
... a transitory hit if you tell the truth always.
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, then, therefore, thus, while, mind you, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 9.8082437276 214% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 85.0 43.0788530466 197% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 74.0 52.1666666667 142% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2497.0 1977.66487455 126% => OK
No of words: 558.0 407.700716846 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47491039427 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.86024933743 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62500037145 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.415770609319 0.524837075471 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 758.7 618.680645161 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.202989062 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.041666667 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211709123812 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0828366213521 0.076458572812 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566866461755 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142736205518 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0310746929875 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.