You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Many people believe that media coverage of celebrities is having a negative effect on children.
To what extent do you agree?
You should write at least 250 words.
We see a lot of posts and news on social and news channels covering the lives of superstars. Millenials believe that this is impacting the children negatively. This essay will discuss the null impact of such coverage or information on the kids.
Firstly, not many little ones are interested in getting to know celebrities and what chores do they perform. Nowadays children are only fascinated by watching cartoons and playing video or mobile games. The mind of a young one might rotate around an activity which he or she likes for the whole day but will surely not show any interest in the lives of other people. Hence, the negative impact of media coverage of celebrities on infants may seem a little farfetched.
However, a recent study shows that the visual memory of a child can only remember 10% of the information which is much less as compared to a human being above 16 years of age. This states that the processing capability of a child's brain is less and can hardly reiterate things on a daily basis. Considering the child is not active on social media sites, the only way to obtain information on celebrities is through television. The probability of a child watching coverage on celebrities is zero and thus the idea of creating an ill pact on the minds of adolescents is nearly impossible.
To conclude, the media posts or coverages do not have a negative impact on the children as they are simply not interested in this particular type of information.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 125, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...% of the information which is much less as compared to a human being above 16 year...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, may, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1219.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78039215686 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73672673145 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564705882353 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7151103828 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.583333333 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145437135627 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0582474682069 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052971041315 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0988529516007 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045560445192 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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