You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well.
What problems will your country face in the next ten years?
How can these problems be overcome?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 254 words.
The problems related to human lifestyle are at peak and ever-increasing post the modernization era. A few African countries, presently, cannot supply the human race with modern needs such as education and drinking water. The following paragraphs will discuss a few such difficulties and provide potential solutions for these issues which will not only aid mankind currently but also secure their future generations.
Indian natural resources, unlike any other country, are on a verge of extinction. One of the prominent situations is deforestation due to population outbursts and farming. According to a study, 60% of man-defined land ought to have natural vegetation for good air quality. Indian land contains only 19% of natural forests making it the worst condition of air around the world. Another major issue is the scarcity of drinking water which can be interlinked with deforestation. Cutting trees for human needs not only depletes the soil's water consumption capacity but also decrements the air purifying capability of trees.
In the near future, one of the prominent solutions is to plant more and more trees and increase the water holding capacity of the soil. Also, harvest water from rain. These options will reduce the problems to a certain extent and help the environment to maintain a proper balance. Eventually, when more forestation is done, the roots of the trees will hold the soil tightly. Also, the air quality will improve parallelly as a result of the pollution levels going down.
To conclude, if we protect the environment it definitely helps us in maintaining the balance of nature. Thus as discussed forestation and water harvesting are solutions that can be useful to overcome issues.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 105, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, thus, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25818181818 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89612108783 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603636363636 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.9800484195 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.375 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1875 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8125 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123044450351 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0380612319276 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0305716678065 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0716150636311 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0139671110681 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.