Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible.
Other young adults prefer to live with their families for a longer time. Which of these
situations do you think is better?
Nowadays youngsters are becoming more and more independent, because of the variety of different factors. As the result, the idea of being independent from their parents seems more appealing to them. I suppose, that it is more reasonable and better for young adults to live apart from their families as soon as possible.
First of all, it is always better to learn how to rely only on yourself as quickly as possible. Parents usually overwhelm their children, which can cause immaturity in real and harsh life. Children are not prepared for the difficulties, they are not familiar with the amount of stress, due to the fact that they were raised in absolutely comfortable environment, which their parents made for them. Somehow, it is crucial for people to try real life as soon as possible and to make their own barriers, which will prevent them from further difficulties that they will face with. Besides, this immaturity that I have mentioned above, can cause depression in the future.
The second thing to mention is relationships. Parents may sometimes be against any relationships, as they believe that this will distract their children from studying/working and as a result a great amount of youngsters face loneliness in the future. Moreover, this parent’s pressure and judgement can cause a variety of issues, such as lack of self-esteem, arrogance. Youngsters have to express their feelings and should nor be afraid or ashamed of it. That is why young adults have to choose their own path, which wiki make them happy. They should get rid of parent’s supervision, of course, when they feel strong enough to do it.
To sum up, I would like to say that no matter how young people are, if they feel themselves strong and mature enough to leave family and start their grown-up life, do not hesitate about it. People have to make their own mistakes and they should not be afraid to make them. Only our own experience will make us wiser and happier.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, if, may, moreover, second, so, apart from, i suppose, of course, such as, as a result, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1634.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 333.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90690690691 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68290042891 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51951951952 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6160011821 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1176470588 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5882352941 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41176470588 5.45110844103 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277927183257 0.236089414692 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0903493360455 0.076458572812 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0973931109937 0.0737576698707 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176849967675 0.150856017488 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621989839532 0.0645574589148 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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