Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The best way to truly relax and reduce stress is to spend time alone.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Undoubtedly, our modern life is much more complicated than the past, so we need some time to reduce life's stress and recover ourselves. From my point of view, I think we should spend time alone to reduce stress and be relaxed.
To begin with, sleep is the most important factor for being calm. This is obvious that people need sleep to rest and relax, which is almost impossible when we are in overcrowded places. Although for sleeping we don't have to be alone, having other people around doesn't let us relax very well, especially when we are very tired. My own experience is a compelling example of this. When I was a student at university, I had to work hard because of my busy classes and my job, so I felt a lot of pressure on my shoulder. I really needed to be alone to had a good sleep, but I lived in the student dormitory and there were plenty of freshman students that wanted to play games or discuss their dating life. As a result, I couldn't sleep well and enough so I was completely tired. Hence, Being alone help to have a good sleep that makes our life stress free.
Furthermore, when we are alone, we don't have to argue with others about every single thing. Arguments are stressful and consume a lot of time and energy. Frankly, living with some friends is awkward because even close friends have a lot of fights about unimportant things. Obviously, having friends around has a lot of advantages for us such as being accepted, support during problems, and also talking about critical situations, but if your friend is not a calm person and he gives his opinion on everything, this can be very annoying. My roommate is a nice person and we spend such a good time, but when I am tired and need some space, he couldn't stop talking. Therefore, I am thinking about living alone next semester to relax and relieve my stress.
Moreover, living alone has an indirect effect on reducing stress such as focusing on studying and managing time, which is a way to get relax and be calm. Living alone can provide such a quiet place for us to study efficiently. When we get good marks other tasks will seem easy for us, so we do not feel under pressure. Students, who live alone can be successful in both their study and life.
In conclusion, people can have a better quality of life by living alone. Of course, we are social creatures and we rely on to interact with each other, but when we have a lot of difficulties in a specific period of our lives, it would be better to live alone.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, frankly, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, really, so, therefore, well, i think, in conclusion, of course, such as, talking about, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2044.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 457.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47264770241 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62358717085 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4271506027 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512035010941 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 649.8 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2668293433 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.9090909091 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7727272727 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.63636363636 5.45110844103 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137113498483 0.236089414692 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0497037061891 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454273139509 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0896687910461 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420303739746 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.