Some companies sponsor sports as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think it is good, while others think there are disadvantages to this. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Some companies tend to merchandise themselves by supporting sports activities which is a core element of human life. There has contradicting views of this argument people dividing are it is practically useful and has a drawback to the business.
On the one hand, opponents of investing sports point to if player is unsuccessful, it might affect product sales to lessen. This means there’s no guarantee that advertising campaign bring in margin with high expenditure on partner. Furthermore, a player who does drugs or misbehaves will have negative impact for the company. Because people appear to look sportsman as a face of business and evidence can be seen by American hockey player, Mark Blunt, who had an agreement with Atlanta General Hospital, has shown his brutality in public. The consequence of his behavior results the number of hospital’s patient or customer come down by 50 percent at this time. This argument also appears to be quite.
However, those who support advertising sports are refer to teams or player can focus on their sports’ achievement instead of financial worries, by which this means sports activities expect large amount of money such as training costs, travel expenses, registration fees and so on. Moreover, proponents of advertising in sports claiming it would make win-win situation for both of them by purchasing free equipment which sportsman cannot afford and company’s sales promotion will be promising effect on its profit. To the supporters of this idea, these benefits are convincing.
In conclusion, my own feeling is that investing money in sports can indeed be a wiser strategy for the companies who boost their income with tackling sport players problem. Of course there are some drawbacks, so that sponsors should carefully choose their partner by not making undervalued investments.
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- Companies spend millions each year on advertising online in magazines and on billboards These adverts can encourage people to buy goods that they do not really need 84
- Some companies sponsor sports as a way to advertise themselves Some people think it is good while others think there are disadvantages to this Discuss both sides and give your opinion 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, in conclusion, of course, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1551.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31164383562 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87013885293 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650684931507 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.6761824922 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.307692308 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53846153846 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172382667702 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588394567564 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392540123294 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113741879766 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388723515521 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.