As transport and accommodation problems are increasing in many cities, some governments are encouraging business to move to rural areas. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
These days cities are flooding with high population resulting in less space to live in and generating difficulties to commute. As a result, governments are looking forward towards establishing organizations and industries in villages. I presume that disadvantages of this precautionary actions surpass its merits to a major extent. My favor is justified further.
The most obvious demerit as per my understanding is that less workers and employees availability. To add on, majority of people reside in cities and this will create difficulties to commute to outside city area on daily basis. Moreover, transportation will also become hard. Road facilities and street light facilities are very poor in rural areas; along with this, single lane roads are available in majority of villages which creates problem to transport goods or raw materials. Furthermore, outside of cities the market is very small for businesses to grow.
To add to the mentioned drawbacks, village life will also get disturb due to the hush and rush. In addition, peace of village gets effected and influence of city life can create difficulties to residents. Also, pollution will increase and this can affect crops and farms. Besides, due to lack of necessities which are available in cities, the city inhabitant may feel uncomfortable.
However, I would not overlook the brighter side that, rural areas will improve due to investment for industries and businesses. Also, village citizens will get employment, hence unemployment rate of rural area will go downward. Consequently, the gap of cities and villages will reduce significantly. In addition, common facilities will also improve such as, roads, governments facilities, street lights and many more will get refine.
To conclude, i pen down saying that government's plan of making business sectors and commercial sectors will affect rural life and business due to lack of availability of resources and facilities. However, this investment can enhance lifestyle of villagers if proper management is done to widen the horizon of cities.
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Suggestion: fewer
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, consequently, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, in addition, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1752.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44099378882 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05167485435 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580745341615 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.7524693648 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2105263158 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9473684211 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.31578947368 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149580558209 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0444147147092 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0298307550016 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0810544481046 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274859277443 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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