International airlines have brought enormous benefits to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impacts on local inhabitants and livelihood. Do the disadvantages of the international airlines outweigh the advantages
In today’s world of globalization and modernization, people can now travel to other countries easily by plane. For this reason, many people argue that international airlines can bring negative effects on the local environment and living quality. From my point of view, I believe that there are some obvious drawbacks of this trend but their advantages are undeniable.
On the one hand, I concur that there are merits when we can make the most use of international airlines. Firstly, traveling by plane is certainly the fastest and most convenient means of transport. It is true that now we can board the plane, have asleep, and wake up on the other side of the planet. This will not only reduce waste time but also help improve productivity since passengers can enjoy the flight effortlessly. Secondly, utilizing international airlines can boost the tourism industry significantly. For example, according to an official survey of the Vietnamese Ministry of Transport, there were more than 100 million tourists to Vietnam by plane. This can certainly bring enormous benefits.
On the other hand, I am also convinced that without being dealt with appropriately, this trend can also provide us with many negative impacts. Firstly, it is scientifically proved that airplanes emit a huge amount of greenhouse gases to our environment and the situation is becoming worse since the cost of flights is more affordable. It can only be handled by investing in a renewable, clean source of energy for planes. Secondly, noise pollution is obvious in the areas located near airports. People here are believed at increased risk of hearing loss as well as heart diseases.
In conclusion, although I agree that there are some drawbacks that international airlines can bring, their benefits are irrefutable and cannot be overlooked, Therefore, neither of them overweighs one another.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1572.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97292224363 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603333333333 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1215804049 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.25 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0625 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126843214251 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0413280146008 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529740689712 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0853001161048 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379174703709 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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