It is absolutely true fact that people cannot imagine their lives without music. It totally interferes in each sphere of human life. What are the most popular music styles today.
Discuss this point of view and give your personal opinion.
Music is the way of life. There is a notion that humans cannot spend their lives without music. It has became an inseparable part of human life and it has been involved in every part of mankind. Additionally, there are several types of music that are well known in the world. The given viewpoint along with my opinion is justified in the ensuing paragraphs.
According to the viewpoint that music has made place in every part of life whether it is health, professional work or entertainment. Firstly, slow rhythms can be used to relieve stress and helps the mind to relax. Therefore, many psychological therapies use tones as medicine. Also, various famous IT companies are playing natural environmental tones to increase focus of their employees. Likewise, runners in morning take music with them as a companion. Secondly, in pubs and night clubs music 15 played additionally. occasions and festivals are nothing without songs and beats Furthermore, entertainment is nothing without background tunes
Furthermore, there are numerous types of traditional and modern music emerged and developed since the arrival of mankind. Western cultures have given several hard rock music in last years. For instance, hip-hop music, rock band music and rap songs which are well known among the young generation. In addition, jazz music and opera songs are also popular throughout the world because of there slow high pitched tones Moreover instrumental music 15 also becoming popular on the internet and musicians are enthusiastically learning new instruments. On the contrary. Some regional kinds of music are played. For example, Indian Bollywood songs Mongolian throat music and Chinese rhymes
To conclude and give my opinion, I pen down saying that music is in fact vital in every aspect of life. Also, innumerable types of classical music and western music that people love to listen to.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 104, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
...spend their lives without music. It has became an inseparable part of human life and i...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Occasions
...ght clubs music 15 played additionally. occasions and festivals are nothing without songs...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, likewise, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in fact, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1587.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23762376238 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78143231372 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594059405941 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 62.9872695224 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.5263157895 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9473684211 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.84210526316 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265341687983 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853290657149 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726409754827 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179470776256 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519386976002 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.